Fangala the Flying Feline

This was incredible. You have stunning imagery, everything flows well, and of course there's a lot of hidden meaning in this. Did I catch references to the Tarot with the ...

Okey-dokey. Well, you sure like to write creepy things, don't you? Don't worry; I like it. The world needs edgy stuff like that to make people bite their nails. I ...

Holy cow! This was brilliant! Gosh, who would think that mosquitoes could be so poetic? This is dark, intense, and has all the elements of a good vampire story, only ...

Hola, Ashlee. Bravo. You have some very lovely similes and metaphors in this; my favorites are the blood tasting like liquid rust, and the part about Lucia's neck seeming as ...

Ah, you can never have too many vampire stories, can you? So, it's good that you open with an action scene, but I think you do too much explaining. Are ...

Wow, shocking. This is certainly one of the more unusual poems out there, and I must say, you pulled it off quite nicely. It's free verse, but it flows like ...

I think you need to write a chapter without mentioning weight. You can still show his struggle without bringing it up every line. Other than that, good job. Keep writing.

Uh... I don't think the cookie analogy works. Sorry, but I don't see how mixing a bowl of cookie dough relates to life, but maybe I'm just not in a ...

BBB rocks the writing world yet again! Like I said in my last review, this story is beautifully daring. It's impossible to NOT feel for your character. I also like ...

Wow. Excellent, like always, and very risky. One of those high school stories that just rips your heart out with the truth of it. You certainly have a talent for ...

Oh joy, this was brilliant. Normally I don't like violently non-cliche fantasy, but you pulled it off effortlessly. Not only was it fun and fast-paced, you've also got a perfect ...

It was good. I think you can cut this down a lot , and watch your questions marks and exclamation points. Opening with an exclamation was brilliant, but that's the ...

Okay, let me explain why I will never (and have never) do drugs: 1. Drugs are bad (duh.) 2. I'm already a freak, and unless I took sedatives, I would ...

Muchas gracias, amigos! Thanks for all your input, and thank you KJ for your nitpicks. Sorry to say there won't be any more additions to Horsefeathers, unless I suddenly get ...

Wow, this is an exact cross between Twilight and The Vampire Lestat. Sorry, I just had to notice that. Maybe I read too many vampire novels. I thought this was ...